   a.breathing.spot 2008-06-09 . chapter 1its good
the only thing i can say is
watch out for
they are a scam
they tell everyone that they've won
but they will only publish you if you buy their book |
 Isabella22 2006-10-19 . chapter 1I can totally see why you got this published. It's beautiful! It has that...mystic feeling.
I love the line "Like the cool desert's night"
That gave me the BEST imagery. I love it so much!
Awesome write! |
 lilyheart311 2005-11-10 . chapter 1finally i can add this truly beautiful yet sad poem! |
 Daphne Kathy Goodman 2004-09-24 . chapter 1U know i love this one =) |
 setty 2004-06-22 . chapter 1 what complete waste of my time. ok u want a review...it's nice. that's all i can say, oh and my lil bro says hi! oh and i'm the 13th review! go bad luck! =) |
| robert 2004-06-22 . chapter 1 hm...it intrigues me how u wrote this. i love the images in the head, cause u give me the feeling of a lost and lonly soul. if this soul needs help then u know where to find me! |
| dionysus 2004-06-22 . chapter 1 um...what can i say. it's intreasting. if u wanna talk to me, just talk to me. ok? |
| jeremy 2004-06-22 . chapter 1 wow, i never knew u had it in u! it's intreasting, and yet it reminds me of a lost dream that seems to be drifting away. (don't stare at me like that) i know u think what i say is werid but ur poem seems werid also, but than again that's what poems are about. and are u really that lost? if u need help, u know where to find me! =) |
| hopeful 2004-06-12 . chapter 1 wow! amazing job, and i love the images you give here. you leave me breathless. and you leave my soul too wondering in the desert! |
| lily 2004-06-12 . chapter 1 Nice! No wonder this is your favorite poem...=) |
| L'dnew =| 2004-05-11 . chapter 1 It's kind of sad, which is nice. |
| rose 2004-03-04 . chapter 1 Grammar mistake here:
its blow away not blows away...all well! |
| rose 2004-02-01 . chapter 1 i like! i like! i bet this is about your own soul =) I bet i am right!:P |
| Heather 2004-01-21 . chapter 1 I believe that this is a great poem!:)
I first read this and thougt WOW this is a deep poem. When you say "Except me" do really mean yourself? Is this poem one that you wrote about your owm soul? or is ot about someone that you know? I know that you have great talent and you should countinue weriting. |
| Heather 2004-01-21 . chapter 1 I believe that this is a great poem!:)
I first read this and thougt WOW this is a deep poem. When you say "Except me" do really mean yourself? Is this poem one that you wrote about your owm soul? or is ot about someone that you know? I know that you have great talent and you should countinue weriting. |
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