 lilyheart311 2005-11-10 . chapter 1it's beautifully written! people need to know the truth... |
 Daphne 2004-02-01 . chapter 1 i like this very much! it helped me a lot. i print this out, so this could help me when i get depress =( but it truly is a great poem! =) |
 Hope 2004-02-01 . chapter 1 i luv how you look on the good side of things, because a lot of people do where masks where i live. Can i pleaz print this so that people could get the advice? thanx! =) |
 lily 2004-02-01 . chapter 1 i like whta u say about masks! they are bad for you~ ^_^ thanks for the advice lilyqueen7 ~_. |
 rose 2004-02-01 . chapter 1 wow! i really love this poem! i think this is one of your best poems that your written here! it shows here that you are good at writing poems, even LONG ones ^_^ nice one lilyqueen7 =) |
 richard huygens 2004-01-29 . chapter 1 you say "be happy and think happy thoughts" as well as "be yourself." but what if being yourself means that you're sad? |
 Ssm 2004-01-20 . chapter 1 I think that this poem is well written, but I don't really undrstand the meaning of it. |
 Namir Swiftpaw 2003-10-30 . chapter 1You know, out of all the poems of yours I have read, this is the best one.
I don't like the ending, but I do enjoy the other parts.
Masks are not good - everyone should just be themselves.
Now, I know you can write a decent poem. Write ANOTHER one! =)
~Namir Swiftpaw |
 Pose For Me 2003-10-16 . chapter 1"Be happy and think of happy thoughts" Reminds me of one of my Quotes. "Think happy thoughts, listen to Enya!" Well, minus the Enya part for you. I really really like this poem. It seems like you've drawn who I am in a poem without even knowing me. I'm deeply moved by this. It brings small tears and smiles. Do you think by chance I could take this poem and post it up in my English class? I promise you i would give you credits... people know my work... they know I wouldn't be capable of writing something such as this. Please? Tell me your answer, in one of my reviews please. |
 BlueEyedTragedy 2003-10-09 . chapter 1This reminded me of myself when I was younger...very beautiful. And it's so good to see a positive poem once in a while...
*Tragic* |