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| lilyheart311 2005-11-10 ch 1,  | abuseit's beautifully written! people need to know the truth... |
| Daphne 2004-02-01 ch 1, anon. | abusei like this very much! it helped me a lot. i print this out, so this could help me when i get depress =( but it truly is a great poem! =) |
| Hope 2004-02-01 ch 1, anon. | abusei luv how you look on the good side of things, because a lot of people do where masks where i live. Can i pleaz print this so that people could get the advice? thanx! =) |
| lily 2004-02-01 ch 1, anon. | abusei like whta u say about masks! they are bad for you~ ^_^ thanks for the advice lilyqueen7 ~_. |
| rose 2004-02-01 ch 1, anon. | abusewow! i really love this poem! i think this is one of your best poems that your written here! it shows here that you are good at writing poems, even LONG ones ^_^ nice one lilyqueen7 =) |
| richard huygens 2004-01-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseyou say "be happy and think happy thoughts" as well as "be yourself." but what if being yourself means that you're sad? |
| Ssm 2004-01-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseI think that this poem is well written, but I don't really undrstand the meaning of it. |
| Namir Swiftpaw 2003-10-30 ch 1, | abuseYou know, out of all the poems of yours I have read, this is the best one. I don't like the ending, but I do enjoy the other parts. Masks are not good - everyone should just be themselves. Now, I know you can write a decent poem. Write ANOTHER one! =) ~Namir Swiftpaw |
| Pose For Me 2003-10-16 ch 1, | abuse"Be happy and think of happy thoughts" Reminds me of one of my Quotes. "Think happy thoughts, listen to Enya!" Well, minus the Enya part for you. I really really like this poem. It seems like you've drawn who I am in a poem without even knowing me. I'm deeply moved by this. It brings small tears and smiles. Do you think by chance I could take this poem and post it up in my English class? I promise you i would give you credits... people know my work... they know I wouldn't be capable of writing something such as this. Please? Tell me your answer, in one of my reviews please. |
| BlueEyedTragedy 2003-10-09 ch 1, | abuseThis reminded me of myself when I was younger...very beautiful. And it's so good to see a positive poem once in a while... *Tragic* |