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| Reviews for Winter Moon |
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   Not Just A Girl 12/13/03 . chapter 1that was great |
| Melancholy Butterfly 12/5/03 . chapter 1 I suppose I picked this haiku to read beacuse I love the night, and I have to say it is really beautiful! The imagery is quite vivid, and I'm not sure if you intended this, but to me there is a sense of mysteriousness. Well done! |
| The Black Rider 11/3/03 . chapter 1 I had long heard about this particular piece and it is excellent. Beautiful imagery, intense emotions, and an overall cathartic feeling present. |
| godawful teen-angst poetry 10/16/03 . chapter 1 *dies from beautifulness* This is so *good*...wow. My favorite line is...the first...no, the second...no...the third...all of them...ah! This is just perfect. Such a lovely image. I adore it. lyv |
| Deadwind 10/12/03 . chapter 1 Awesome Miz...awesome! |
| swirlygirl 10/12/03 . chapter 1 very pretty great work! |
| ionlyliveindreams 10/11/03 . chapter 1 Oh, I wish it would snow... Anyways, cool haiku. Very good description of the moon. Keep writing ionlyliveindreams |
| teh tarik 10/11/03 . chapter 1 That was breathtaking. The description of the moon was awesome. Continue writing. |
| chairmanmeow 10/10/03 . chapter 1 Oh wow... I love this! |
| Keep it 100 10/10/03 . chapter 1 Wow. That was so beautiful. Heart of the Sword |
| Isay 10/10/03 . chapter 1 Wonderful choice of words! I love the second line... "floating as snowflakes tumble" Very original. _ Keep it up. Isay |
| Children of the Root 10/9/03 . chapter 1 beautiful description. I love it. |
| soulspring 10/9/03 . chapter 1 i really like this image... quite serene actually. well done! |
| Delusional Happiness 10/9/03 . chapter 1 You just put together two of my favourite things in the world! Snow and the Moon! This is great. Thanx for the advice on my last poem. It helped alot and I've tried to improve it if u want to have a look. Delusional Happiness |
