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| Leuca 2004-09-15 ch 1, | Exellent imagery. I think everyone can relate to such feelings, and you have written them down exactly how they seem... Reminds me of and old photo reel, with black and white photographs slowly turning to yellow and fading into dust. |
| Victor Soulstorm 2003-12-15 ch 1, | I would have been struck speechless if my girlfriend wrote this for me. honestly, its really good. I Saw the Vicky thing, cute, like the 2nd grade child she is. I'm 17 by the way. |