|Reviews for Pigments|
| insanemonkeyboy 10/28/03 . chapter 1
heh - it was different - rythmic, somewhat funny I thought anyway - anyway - it was good
Thanks for the reviews btw
| swirlygirl 10/19/03 . chapter 1
that was different i enjoyed it a lot!
| pippin tomson 10/14/03 . chapter 1
i like your poem, it's happy!
| JJR Meerraf 10/11/03 . chapter 1
It is weird, but me like. Your rhyming was some times a little too good, like words that sound exactly alike make it sound a little... weird, but over all it was still a good poem.
Writers Block hasn't struck too badly, don't be discouraged.
| simpleplan13 10/9/03 . chapter 1
the last stanza is jsut rnadomly put in there.. it needs a segway... otherwise its pretty good! sorry about the writers block
| Nerf 10/9/03 . chapter 1
I agree it aint ur best, but it reli isn't bad. U hav sum reli great rymes.
I'm sur u wil work through the writers block.
| AVIGON 10/9/03 . chapter 1
I for one LOVE poetry that's all about rhythm, and I think I discovered enough rhythm in this one to make me like it, although I wouldn't have minded it if you got the poem to pick up the pace a bit more.
| hellomister 10/9/03 . chapter 1
Well, very creative.
But I am completely lost in translation.
What is this about, again?
I really like the idea of "Black clouds leaning".
| Wren Craven 10/9/03 . chapter 1
That was so cool! please R&R my work! I need the reviews!