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Koi Koi 2003-10-17 . chapter 2
i would kill for universal translation! and telepathy. perhaps telepathy first, THEN universal translation. yes.. very good. im hungry and i ate all of my cheese. no one is online but now i have a curfew online that dies at 9:30 because my father-figure is a sadistic bastard. anyway, thats why i'm online alone right now. so i dont waste the time that i have. i really want to shave his head. hey, who is this ghost person? is it their real mother or something? dont tell me! it'll ruin the surprise!! unless i get to be the omni-beta, in which case it is ok for me to know all. heh heh, something is oddly satisfying about knowing i get to see chapters before anyone else. is "he who is swift" hot? nah, i wouldn't be into him, he probably got that name from "performance" problems. *wink wink* how does he even hear these things?? oh well, at least he gets it, thats an improvement. *shoots shady with staple gun* for crying out loud would you shut up?! good i hope you're dead. *ahem* anyways. i hope krys is ok! i've never had stitches, that i know of, so i dont know if it's superbly painful to have them removed.. poor neko!! *blink blink... blush!* i have to go wash shady's mouth out. and coming from ME you know he must have said something... unspeakably... unspeakable.
~shoelaces and pencil shavings...KOI!*
Koinu! 2003-10-17 . chapter 1
heh heh i know i said i wasnt gonna review this story in my review to your other fic but i lied. you need reviews! everyone should review your fics and worship your creativity. can i be beta to all of your fics now? cuz i wanna! it would be cool. i would have something to do other than irritate your sister. also, sorry about the review to the vamp story (WHICH I LOVE AND ADORE AND I WANT YOU TO UPDATE!) i was super hyper for about five minutes. but i also adore this fic. i dunno. something about the whole "being from another planet" thing kicks **. is karai evil like chaos's karai or is she cool? cuz i would hate to have to kill her for making you sad. no wait. if she made you sad i would take joy in her slaughter. it's cool how her voice can kill... is that even IN this chapter? i dunno cuz i'm just reviewing for the sake of reviewing since i already read it twice before. i gotta go review the other chapter. ja!
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