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| Kelly I 2005-11-15 ch 1, | once again, nice work. You had me at the end there. I ddin't expect that. good job.-Kelly I |
| jay 2005-10-30 ch 1, | i love youi love the ways you care weither i see moon at nightor the stars in the skyi love the ways you laughat even my cornest jokesfull hearted and full of lifei love the ways you'll fixevery gramatical problem in this i love the ways you save me from the evils withinfrom the darker daybut mostly from those who say"i love you" (now ** off)i love the ways your shybut stand up for those who need iti love the ways you listonto every word we sayweither from our mouths or our eyesi love your briliant soulin your beautiful eyeson your beautiful facethat glows when you smilei love the way i know you wont belive a word of what i saybut thats okay because i knowi love you thank you for everything you are and everything you do. thank you for being my friend. jay |
| Jilly 2004-10-07 ch 1, | Meg, this poem kills me because you're so lovely. and i think you need a far greater self-esteem because you're a hell of a lot better than you think. now on the subject of your writing technique, i love this. you're talented. it makes me happy =D |
| Selena O'Brian 2004-01-17 ch 1, | insightful. its good, a little jumpy but i like it. |