wow this is so far so good ^^ i hope you make the other two cause i might use your story (since its so good so far) for my drawing. i been looking for a story to draw ^^ i like yours)

loved it. please continue

good story, u gots to continue asap >:D

Sorry, chapter 2 will be taken down for editing. ^__^;;

evil sensei!!

longer chapter than the last one. i find this still very nice to read. tho, it seems short still.

Umm.. r we gunna kno the demons name or something? I'm not sayin nothin bad i was juss wonderin. but good story

kewl... ^^

Must say, very good. strange enough, there's weird symbols floating around as there seems to be in everyone's. =^^= Luv ya! -Snea

very interesting. id like if update soon...

Please update soon. Make the other chapters longer, 2.

I have to study for a test, but oh well. I really like your story so far, and I want to read more. I am going to add it to my favorite stories list right now. Please update!!