I'm really surprised nobody reviewed this story, because it's really not bad. (: a bit on the dramatic side, but otherwise, good character development and plot! great job. I really found that I could relate to the characters.

I can't believe no one's reviewed that. It's really good, I would say more but I read it a while ago and mustn't have reviewed. I normally would though, strange. Keep writing. You have talent.
~~Bekki~~