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Reviews For: Crimson Blades

Crimson Bleeder
2004-01-09
ch 1,
Oh my word... I love this. Purely powerful. Nothing more is to be said. I loved it.
D-Scyther
2003-10-19
ch 1,
I must say that we both might have a passion for scythes. The piece is intense and keeps the readers somewhat like at the edge of their seat... I feel that way. I like especially the last parts: "A glaive of peace; a scythe of destruction; the vermillion glaive; the crimson scythe..."

Nice work... =)
Herman Greek
2003-10-18
ch 1,
well dang. lost me on the first quick read, but when i looked closer i liked it quite a bit. i particularly like how the lines pair up. 1w/2, 2w/3, 3w/4, etc etc...and each set of 2 lines has its own message in the context of the poem. If that's what you meant to do, Bravo! if that's not what you meant to do, then bravo still!
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