hope version 20 or 2.0. i think u are stuck on aol land! lol. umm, like i said before, like the idea, but u could improve on it too ) i wonder what your english teacher said?

i like it here but it could improve! )

Yay! I understand it now! *happy* Rose petals are soft ... random thought

Hmm... not exactly sure on how to comment for this. It's ... different. I don't understand it though.

This was beautiful! I truly mean that, as well (you know I wouldn't be anything but honest with you!) and I really hope you continue to write in this vein, as you have gotten immenesely better since the last time I checked you out.

I will add this poem to my favorite storys list...because I really, really did enjoy it.

"The fragile strength of a Rose" was an exquisite line.

Keep writing! Don't ever give up.

Namir Swiftpaw

hiya! well done! such a good idea and words! anyways...one thing is that i'm not so sure why this is PG. But that doesn't matter cos its really good, keep writing!

cya )

ps. could you review some of my work please?

wow, that was awesome! keep up the great work! please rr my stuff, too!

chloe