good. i like it.

I like the line "perfect in imperfection" good, overall. for some reason, the line "reflecting my inner emotion" felt too..I don't know..blatant? I'm sorry. Sometimes I get just a gut feeling from poems or lines, and then can't explain the review. Also, for me, personally, I like to separate stanzas with commas, not periods, because then it stops.
by the searing heat of your kiss.
your kiss,
I think there should definitely be a comma there. That's just me though-you can ignore it. Ahh, sorry for rambling!
Kiara

Beautiful. What's your major anyway? You have a gift for writing, regardless if you plan on persuing a career, keep up the hobby. Your work is inspirational...

o i like it. Very good. I really like the last two stanzas. Well i can relate to that and im sure a lot of other people could to. Good job, keep it up.

Elegant, dirty, broken, warm, cold...this is not bad at all, it's the complete opposite. You are definitely one of the more talented poets here in , so don't stop your writing. you inspire me. :)

Nowhere near horrible, at all. I like the graduation from one stanza to another, and the strong ending.

Keep writing.

Mia