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| fbarlolken 2005-02-10 ch 1,  | abuseAww... I am so sorry for him and his love. ::sigh:: [not person; emotion]What a jerk of his boyfriend; no consideration at all. Arkensi |
| Stefen 2004-07-14 ch 1, | abuse:) What more can I say? |
| Lady Chance 2003-12-01 ch 1, | abuse*twitch, annoyed groan* you know what you've done right? You inspired me! gr... *glare* now I HAVE to work on Caught in Shadow. Thanks thanks alot *mumble, mumble* oh, yeah great little one shot thingy *poke it and runs when it moves. 10:00 PM |
| Aloh Dark 2003-10-13 ch 1, | abuseOh My Gods! I think I'm gonna cry!! That was.. *sigh* So sweet and.. Ah! It was soo good!! I loved it!! |
| underjoyed 2003-10-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseWas it in the biology section, by any chance? ;) Seriously, I think het warnings are needed more than slash, since I'm one of those weirdo(e?)s who avoids most het ;) Anyway, I read this on sw.pb22.com but because of the shittiness of my computer, I shall review here. Oh, so pretty! I love the way you do that first person narrative, because you really get into the way the character is feeling, and you make the reader feel his emotions (and make them cry). Very, very good. I lurve the ending. It's beautiful. |
| Ayakaishi Fei 2003-10-11 ch 1, anon. | abuse*giggles* I wish I found things like this in my science folder... *sighs*. This was brilliant, I sorta got the feeling that maybe Em felt for the main character, which made me feel a little sad for her, but I liked it very much anyway. It was... beautiful. |
| cordy 2003-10-11 ch 1, anon. | abusewow... that's... WOW! it's so beautiful... i could feel real emotion behind the words i've got goosbumps all over! |