Oh. Very good. I loved it, and have felt those before.

OH! Thats Beautiful!!

Keep Writing,

-*Eressea*-

wow that is soo different! oeer very very sad...i'm not good with subject of love so me saying good is like equal to godliness... :D

Kinda...bittersweet...I guess. Excellent work, great job.

A good poem, but you might want to check it for spelling errors. Otherwise, I loved it, espeically the contrast at the end...chilling yes, but the idea of something being happy before a person dies or leaves someone is rather ironic. Nice!