Wonderful, someone else still uses their nose! -m-
p.s. If you get a moment look at my "I often wash my fruits, Don't You?"

fiery and passionate...and suddenly so sad... i like the combination much

Fetish poem! ...Heh, I wrote a fetish poem too! I'm so proud! But anyway, I like this one...It's rough and sad though, poor one who dreams...

I must say that I postively love this poem. How well it seems to match with people I know and even myself. The rhyme is good and has a nice flow to it that can easy trap one. While this may not match some of your other work, this still seems to fit.