*shock* Wha..what the? My GOODNESS! What in hadeyhoo was I THINKING when I wrote some of this stuff?!?! lol...I crack myself up late at night. But seriously? My first line on this last chapter? I *shuddered* when I read it! lol
I cannot WAIT to redo this thing. When I have the time..

Forgot to mention this before - you should make a sequal; the ending leaves generous room for one. :)

I love it! I love it! I love it!
And you say you never write anything happy. (If it has a happy ending, I count it as happy.) OK, so it is a little sad when her family dies, but that's the only part. And you don't REALLY know her family as characters, so its not that sad for the reader. And then you expect Powell and Faye (you know, that's my middle name - spelled exactly) to die, but then they don't! Even the name of the last chapter is forboding, so I was really excited when I actually read the chapter! This is definitely going on my favorite stories list. *u*
Oh, and I like my first name idea - the strongest power. Interpret that how you will (love or *fire*).

Sorry, I misunderstood last chapter, my thought bubble was confused. Love what's happening here! (pun unintentional) But i smell trouble brewing! :o

Great chapter! *thought bubble* Is Powell related to Valen? Hm...in that case, wonder who he is...maybe the son of that fairy? (you don't have to answer if you don't want, I like to think out loud.)
Since you said in your summery that you're reading it over again, I won't point out your typos and then throw things at you so you'll find and change them (like I did to pont *giggle*). I think I'll wait untill I finish the story to suggest a name, but here's an idea: the strongest power - what d'ya think?

*gasp* well, you did say your stories were a bit depresing. I bet Valen is the power. I have to stop reading now to do homework, I'll definitely finish later.

I love it already! Just one question, the first section with Sahrah and Kivrin - when is it? Is it before they get married? B/c they seem sort of ... childish.