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| AJS 2007-03-27 ch 13,  | abuseThis is cute. I didn't expect it to end so soon. The timing was a little confusing, especially because things weren't really explained very well like one second Zane was recovering and then it's summer? I didn't really get that. Rayne & Lunar are such unique names but I like them a lot :) It was fluff and it was cute - especially for a light, quick read, which was what I was looking for :) -- Alyssa |
| NightlyHalo 2007-02-27 ch 8, | abusetowards the end of this chapter Rayana said 'gotta ask my dad' don'tchya mean uncle? =P |
| Alenor 2006-08-22 ch 13, | abuseheya, that was a great story. cya later ~ Alenor. |
| Shaina 2005-08-28 ch 1, | abusegreat so far. I just dont understand who the heck Lunar is, lol |
| FamousOneLiners 2005-07-01 ch 13, | abuseso cute |
| depressed-and-bored 2005-05-20 ch 13, | abuseTHATS IT!! Oh please make a sequel! Please! |
| the happy carrot 2005-04-17 ch 13, anon. | abuseOmg.. there is one word.. aw |
| Stephixy Bell 2005-02-09 ch 13, | abuseLoved it! I read it all very quickly.The only thing that trew me off is that I read another of your storys with a Lunar in it. LOL. oh well I got used to it. |
| Shahr 2005-01-27 ch 13, | abuseLovelyJust lovely. You name should be Master of Romance Sories, not Master of the Chimps. *grins widely |
| a reader 2005-01-11 ch 13, anon. | abusegood...but kinda short...and what was up with the intro/dream thingy w/her wrists & stuff?!? but otherwise, really good |
| jegan 2005-01-01 ch 13, | abusecool storyvery sweet*smiles* |
| hurricane1 2004-10-04 ch 13, | abuseyay! this is a nice story...pretty funny at some parts too...so yea... i cant tell u to update...cuz it wud b weird since the story has ended...but i hv to say dat this is a good story and i hv to credit u w/ ur geniusness...lol...jk jk...anywayz...keep writing...hv a good sleep!...(im lame i know) -hurricane |
| rock 'n' roll junkie 2004-08-09 ch 13, | abuseI'm guessing, by the ending of this story, Lunar and Rayne are still together and will see each other soon. I guess you leave this to our imaginations. God I love your stories, keep it up hun! |
| rock 'n' roll junkie 2004-08-09 ch 12, | abuseAww, this story's almost over, and it's so good!! I love Lunar *pouts*, haha. You are crazy, lol, but so damn funny. I can't wait to read the next chapter. TTY then! |
| rock 'n' roll junkie 2004-08-09 ch 5, | abuseThis is making me want a Lunar really badly, lol. I love this, I'm adding this to my faves! |