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AJS
2007-03-27
ch 13,
abuseThis is cute. I didn't expect it to end so soon. The timing was a little confusing, especially because things weren't really explained very well like one second Zane was recovering and then it's summer? I didn't really get that.

Rayne & Lunar are such unique names but I like them a lot :) It was fluff and it was cute - especially for a light, quick read, which was what I was looking for :)

-- Alyssa
NightlyHalo
2007-02-27
ch 8,
abusetowards the end of this chapter Rayana said 'gotta ask my dad' don'tchya mean uncle? =P
Alenor
2006-08-22
ch 13,
abuseheya, that was a great story. cya later ~ Alenor.
Shaina
2005-08-28
ch 1,
abusegreat so far. I just dont understand who the heck Lunar is, lol
FamousOneLiners
2005-07-01
ch 13,
abuseso cute
depressed-and-bored
2005-05-20
ch 13,
abuseTHATS IT!! Oh please make a sequel! Please!
the happy carrot
2005-04-17
ch 13, anon.
abuseOmg.. there is one word.. aw
Stephixy Bell
2005-02-09
ch 13,
abuseLoved it! I read it all very quickly.The only thing that trew me off is that I read another of your storys with a Lunar in it. LOL. oh well I got used to it.
Shahr
2005-01-27
ch 13,
abuseLovelyJust lovely. You name should be Master of Romance Sories, not Master of the Chimps. *grins widely
a reader
2005-01-11
ch 13, anon.
abusegood...but kinda short...and what was up with the intro/dream thingy w/her wrists & stuff?!? but otherwise, really good
jegan
2005-01-01
ch 13,
abusecool storyvery sweet*smiles*
hurricane1
2004-10-04
ch 13,
abuseyay! this is a nice story...pretty funny at some parts too...so yea...
i cant tell u to update...cuz it wud b weird since the story has ended...but i hv to say dat this is a good story and i hv to credit u w/ ur geniusness...lol...jk jk...anywayz...keep writing...hv a good sleep!...(im lame i know)
-hurricane
rock 'n' roll junkie
2004-08-09
ch 13,
abuseI'm guessing, by the ending of this story, Lunar and Rayne are still together and will see each other soon. I guess you leave this to our imaginations. God I love your stories, keep it up hun!
rock 'n' roll junkie
2004-08-09
ch 12,
abuseAww, this story's almost over, and it's so good!! I love Lunar *pouts*, haha. You are crazy, lol, but so damn funny. I can't wait to read the next chapter. TTY then!
rock 'n' roll junkie
2004-08-09
ch 5,
abuseThis is making me want a Lunar really badly, lol. I love this, I'm adding this to my faves!
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