Wow...this really touched me. The way you expressed the girl's remorse and sorrow and how she ended it all by suicide. Beautifully written.

~~Trinity

O.O *sobs* GAH! You're so sad! I really like this! Yay, go you!

I'm seeing a really neat trend here. This ability to make images with simple words is really amazing me. O_o I know what it's like to want to write depressing poetry, but this is more gentle and sad than the usual depressing stuff. Nice job, and nice deviation from pointless angst. Me likies. ^_^

This is good, you've got a nice choice of words, I especially like stanza three.

You reviewed my poem 'War Of The Blood', asking why the demons won. I guess I just like evil winning, simple.

You also asked why don't I write a happy poem. I have written one or two 'happy' poems but I don't like them much. I am not a happy person and therefore my feelings, thoughts and ideas are not generally happy. I'm miserable, my work is miserable. It's as simple as that.

sea...boat...MUSIC!AH...hehe music reminds me of a certian teache...hehe...

...Oh my god. Jeez. What the heck were you feelin' when ye wrote this?? ...Damn. That's just, damn... Sheesh. I'm never letting you on my ship now...