ROCK FIST! Sorry, this reminded me of a song they play on WAY fm. I can't think of the actual title or who sings it.
But very good poem! Nice description. I felt like i was there!
lauren

Cool way to describe the atmosphere.

Heart of the Sword

I like! It really reminds me of a Dance Dance Revolution Party we had a few weeks ago... it was quite a bit like this. Very awesome poem. I like!

write on!