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| ManyShadesOfGray 2003-11-10 ch 5,   | I really like this story so fair. It's great! Keep it up! ^_~ |
| purple-panther 2003-10-11 ch 1, | YAY! This is great!! I can't wait to see what happens next! This new project of yours is really awesome. Keep it up! ~purple-panther~ |
| Muffinmans Acquaintance 2003-10-11 ch 1, | So this is your first submission? Nice job. Just a few tips: you might want to put a return/indent after each quote spoken by a different person. Oh, and also, would Hoshi really say, "nice to meet ya?" Is that the right dialect? Well, that's totally up to you, just think about it... Anyway, I'm really interested about what's going to happen. I'll havta check back when you put up more chapters! Please read my story if you get the chance! ;) |