Now that both my weak Hikari and idiot Aibou are gone, i can tell you what __I__ think about your stuff. If there wasn't so much disgusting romantic angst, i'd like this. nice and bloody. Now. SHI NE!

This touches deeply with the things I feel. The writing could use some work, but I feel such an affinity with it that I'm putting it on my favorites. Betrayal releasing the hidden demon within . . . I've written a lot about that. It's interesting to read that other people have similar reactions.

strong...ultimately powerful...the only downfall is the fact that its not deep...if you put more emotion into it...very good poem

well, I'm a little concerned. Everything's okay isn't it? Let me know. As far as the writing, I'm too distracted... wondering what's real and what isn't. But you've chosen good words, for what you're trying to convey.

Love, Raye