well...i'm not really sure wut this ones actually saying...but little bits of it fit together and they seem to have some truth or reality in them.

hi, it's taken me a little longer i, know. First the review.
the only supposed error i saw was this: . . ."Makes me want to wretch. . ."
You mean "Retch" as in vomit?
otherwise, it flowed very nicely through the whole way, i think.
If tyrael was a dragon, wouldn't the tail emerge from the butt, instead of the back? lol. anyways, i'll quit harrassing you about it. Ch.10's up, and i have to think more on ideas, so more won't be posted for a while. ch.10 turned out a bit crazy, so i will diffinitly rewrite it because of that. Ariche was lame. you'll see. he was, in ways, done better in BS's story.lol.
ttyl!
-Rachel.

Excellent work! I'm gonna try to read all of your pieces, hopefully within my stupid computer time limit x.x 2 hours a day. Curses...

Hm...do I sense a little anger about someone in a group project? Hm...I know how you feel.

Oh, wow--another excellant piece!! I had when guys (or anyone) does that! They think we don't care, but we do! Excellantly written!

hm this was really good strange kinda how you like him and then you hate him but i know what you mean! that's happened to me so many time when someone is all cool or whatever and then for some reason or another you just start to get annoted of them and then grow to hate them. ne wayz nice poem its realy good nice title too. hehe *thinks of Linkin Park* haha unless you don't like them than who needs Linkin Park!? lol
~byez and thanx fer the reviews! adding you to favs ok?
~me

Yey! I found the little button with the review thing! don't you see?

hehe!

I personally think this is a strangely kind of harsh poem, that i definately can relate to. a cool approach to hating someone, you might say.

^.^

i enjoyed it.it's very clear and self-expressing(if it were true...i think)

This is a strange poem...I mean first you talk about how you liked the way he was and then you start to talk about what he seems to care about. I mean its ok that way but I don't get it.