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Melly 2007-01-16 . chapter 1
Seriously, I'm not stalking you. I just really like your work.

Ok, this poem kind of confused me. I don't really understand what the situation that this poem is representing actually is.

But it rhymes beautifully, so no harm done. :)
Kingpin 2004-02-02 . chapter 1
Hmm... As I read this poem I was reminded of a song you sung once. It had lyrics close to these. No matter. Still beautiful.
Eika 2003-10-12 . chapter 1
Got an author alert late last night (just before being kicked off) so I hurried to read it this morning, (even though I usually don't like romance, I've learned not to expect anything normal from you.) Excellent! Though it's all in one big paragraph (was it supposed to be?) I could understand it. It's all about a boy who thinks his girl was taken away to heaven, but he doesn't care, she doesn't belong there. So finally she's allowed to come back. Very original.
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