So I read this on the way to campus… because bus rides are just boring. Since I've been stalking your works, I thought I gave this one a go.

I read Half Past Forever & On A Clear Day first but I'm guessing this was your first story posted here, yes? So I'm guessing they're related to each other… Kincaid, Lamont etc.

Um, I think it's needs more chemistry between the main protagonists. It was rather fast pace to me… like there wasn't much tension or events that build up their love for each other but all is good. I enjoyed this story and all your other ones too. Great job!

-retronadya

I loved it. ditto. you're stories seem to have a similar style on them but they're by the same author, after all. I hope you continue on creating your amazing stories!

I don't know how, but somehow, once I start reading a chapter of any of your stories, I instantly become hooked onto it. I read Half Past Forever which I loved lots and On a Clear Day which was also very good. However, Half Past Forever will always be my favorite out of all of them because it just has some deep meaning in it that struck me and will make me remember forever. I was very reluctant in reading your stories at first, seeing the many chapters but then I came to realize that your chapters are actually really short compared to other stories I've read so you've go a lot more than other stories. I actually just finished On a Clear Day and it's 1 in the morning right now so I'm afraid I'll have to continue this tomorrow no matter how much I want to stay sitted, staring at the screen, absorbing every word you created. I hope this story will be as good as your other stories, but I'm pretty sure it will be. =)

this story was really lovely
you should be proude pf it (Y)
x

i can't believe you only have 22 reviews, your stories are amazing

Amazing story.

yay i love this story!! you should send all your stuff to publishers!! they are the best stories i have ever read on fictionpress!! sorry for the excessive use of exclaimation points but these stories are too damn good!
i love it! please update your other story eden's fall. please? i'll love you even more!

Awesome!

I can't believe this story doesn't have more reviews! I'm adding to them coz this story is brilliant! x

i LOVE! your story. it is really very good

Well, I'm glad I stumbled onto this story in the first place! You did a wonderful job, and I did enjoy reading the rest of the chapters. Thank me? Thank you for writing such a heartwarming story. In my mind, this would make a very nice action/romance film. Hehe. :)

All I can say is...WOW! You had me interested in this story ever since the first chapter and it only took me about thirty minutes to read the whole thing because it was SO GOOD! This was a great story! Keep going with all the rest of your stories. They are amazing! You are a very talented writer! :)

Read this story and I really liked it. The plot was interesting and it was well-written.

It's finished!! Wow, thanks for such quick updating-- I only expected a chapter or two at the very most..
I have to say that the ending did seem a bit too coincidental, but hey, if that's what got them back together, I'm all for it. :) I'll try and get to "Half Past Forever" soon. Thanks so much for this story!!
-bisca

OMG OMG OMG!
THAT WAS SUCH A BEAUTIFUL STORY!
I can't believe more people don't read it! THOSE LOSERS WOULDN'T KNOW GOOD WRITING IF IT KICKED THEM IN THE SHINS!
Wah! I'm glad cause it was good, but I'm sad cause it's over! lol
Sorry for being such a baby, but that was one of the best stories I've read on FP.net. WRITE MORE! I'll be hear to review it! ~Tori