It is downright wierd, all right. But very original. I mean, who else would have a poem about sea cucumbers out there? ^_^ Great poem.
P.S I saw several sea cucumbers once, when I was little, and they basically make me frightened of them. They're hideous little creatures, you know.

hehe! very cute! ^^

o it was magnificent! however i am suggesting a sequel be made telling the story of the sea cucumbers search for love and how he'll never find it. why? why wont he find love? because he's a sea cucumber and thus a social reject.

wow. that was deep. i can totally see you being a sea cucumber. *sniff* tear. o so moving. o so moving. wow. i wish i were a sea cucumber. sigh sadness. ok, on a more critical note, you can tell it's one of those class poems that is ment to go into a 4 year olds book of poems. now that i've been all mean and critical, i have only one thing left to say. Van Van Van Van Van Van Van Van Van Van Van Van Van Van Van Van Van Van Van Van Van Van Van Van Van Van Van Van Van Van Van Van Van Van Van Van Van Van Van Van Van Van Van Van Van. ttee hee. Dilandau.

BWAHAHAHA! This is insanse, and yes, I did demand it be put up here because it's probably the ONLY poem ever written about a sea cucumber. Ever. You've got originality there, Mizu. *evil laughter*