I really like this! short and to the point. but sweet, almost sighing, or mourning, for some reason . . . anyway, cookies to you! (they're chocolate chip!) ^_~

Very nice creative piece! Keep up the wonderful work!

nice piece. short and sweet. i like the rhyme also. good job. keep writing!

wow. i really like this poem. Its very good.

Coolness.
This is White-Mage-Of-Death. I started writing the story. I haven't got it up yet. The next thing is the cast of cahracters. :)

I know what your doing but it's not going to work! If I just HEAR about the sea nothing will happen. I have to SEE the sea, thats when I die. You of all people should know that. Nice try anyway.

LG