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| Amira Sandlewood 2005-05-22 ch 1,   | Magnificent. I share your liking of haikus, but not your skill, unfortunetly. The poem rings with truth, and I can nearly see the frost taking over the garden, after that last line. |
| Miz E. Mak 2003-12-05 ch 1, | I hate it when summer ends... it is so depressing. I hope you weren't too sad when your garden died. At least it was beautiful while alive! write on. |
| AnnaSun 2003-11-12 ch 1, | Hi me again :) This is great! I like your haikus. Thanks for sharing :) |
| strikeachord 2003-10-19 ch 1, | beautiful imagery. very true. great work. |
| soulspring 2003-10-18 ch 1, | incredible amount of imagery and emotion for 3 lines. |
| simpleplan13 2003-10-12 ch 1, | very good poem... completely true |
| me10 2003-10-12 ch 1, | this is sad, but well written, and the imagery is great, i love the first line! |
| Emi Amara 2003-10-12 ch 1, | hiya! nice haiku, its really pretty!! and the line, "flooded by sweet smells" is really good! well done cya =) |