I really liked the imagery in this poem. For some reason I really like line "The Tides of Time are merciless." It just really works well with the other lines

wow! i love the wording in this poem. it's powerful, and amazing, the way you write, i can see it. incredible :)
keep writing
~KS

Ulgh. Who needs such emotion? If it wasn't so lovey-dovey, i'd actually like it.

I am speechless. This (to but it bluntly) was awesome. Wonderful work.

Keep writing.

-Seras

Hey, I really like this. Great piece.

Wow... like I've said before, very nice. Keep it up.

Fantastical...very nice imagery. Another winning piece..

wow...this poem...wow...its so deep...and the comparison between a bird searching in the seas and searching for love is so...perfect...comparing is always a strength in poetry...or at least by my standards...this poem is beautiful