Really really good story! Just the right mix of action, imagery, emotion, and really relatable humour! Great ideas too! Write on!

Yes, I do realize it looks like the story is in the bin marked 'Not going to be finished', but I wanted to tell you I enjoyed it nonetheless. Nice work.

Aww, this is a really good story and pretty hilarious. Hope you update soon!

~kitana5055

Ooh! Awesome chapter!

Wow! Awesome! I love funny stories and vampires! They're two of my most favorite things! Great job! ...*randomly yells* CHEESECAKE!

Wow, I LOVE this story! I don't normally like vampire stories, but somehow I've found myself reading two in a row. I got this from Da Jarsey Devil's profile. It's amazing, I love it. Very funny. I think outta Akito and Rikyu, I prefer Akito but they're both good charcters. But now the new one... well, we'll see. *adds to favourite stories* Please update soon, or I might die! (I tend to get a bit melodramatic at times ^-^)

~Isa Koliki~

Hehe. Funny story. I like this story, especially the dialogue. It reminds me of my friends and our crazy conversations. I hope you continue to update the story. Keep up the good work. You rock!

'what did you say? all i heard was **' lololol that was the funniest thing i read all day. i told you i'd read your other fics didn't i? This is great. i love it so far. i can't wait for the update. This fic is so fun!

ah the perfect fic, a hot sexy untouchable guy . . except if your the main character, (damn those theories!) and if your a guy (but that could be debatable!) a cute hero, that weirdly enough looks like a chick in your fic . ^-^ (how kawaii!) and a kick but main character who fights for womens rights! woo yeah! but is dense, when it comes to men ^^! yay! and a cute little girl . . i can't wait to meet your final character to make this group complete!
and i think your style of writing is fantastic! my fav line . . .
Idiot. Moron. Dimwit. Dolt. Bastard. Jerk. Hentai. Meanie. **.
@_@!
update soon
.: bLuE cArroT :.
update soon

More, more! It's very good, I love this story. I think adding character profiles could be a good thing, so we have a better idea of how everyone looks. Maybe it's just me, but that's what I think.

Whoo!
I love this story! ^-^
H-Double Oh-T evil bad guys!
Pretty boy Prince Charmings!
Heroines ready for a fight!
What's not to love, I ask? ^-^

Lovely chappie! Realy, really good. Akito has mood swings . . . fun . . . happy fun. ^_^ Update soon!

Well then everyone seems to want this book, what a pain...

hm...this is quite interesting, but what happened to the book, must read on...

Lol . . . Akito is spiffy. Please, please, PLEASE an Akito/Sei thing . . . Great sory, keep going!