Reviews for Becoming Human
Jess Angel 10/16/03 . chapter 1
*Jumps up and down* A mechanical dream!

Hm...where have I've heard that before? I wonder...hehehe. Very cool sequel. I loved the "error" parts.

You know what this reminds me of? Big O...heh. yup. *shifts eyes* What?

May the writing live on.

Jess 0:o)
BlueEyedTragedy 10/12/03 . chapter 1
This was definitely the perfect sequel. This may be (this, along with its predecessor) be your most original work yet...

*Tragic*
Seira 10/12/03 . chapter 1
well what do you expect me to say? of -course- i love it! you're so wonderful at coming up with original ideas...

I WANT YOUR FLOW!1ONE
DeadRaven69 10/12/03 . chapter 1
KIK ASS CHICKA!

always creative ideas

I envy you...
aconsciousjulia 10/12/03 . chapter 1
wow...a perfect follow up to the last poem, and this one, makes wonderful sense...i dream...a mechanical dream...lovely

*jules*
S.C. Preclarus Noctis 10/12/03 . chapter 1
Oh...that was so odd. But odd as in a good odd! It reminds me of the movie Bicentennial Man or howeveryou spell it...even if it was a boring movie..it had MEANING to it! -
K.G. Hollingsworth 10/12/03 . chapter 1
Nice work... The rhythm gets a little fuzzy in the middle, but nice work.