|Reviews for Becoming Human|
| Jess Angel 10/16/03 . chapter 1
*Jumps up and down* A mechanical dream!
Hm...where have I've heard that before? I wonder...hehehe. Very cool sequel. I loved the "error" parts.
You know what this reminds me of? Big O...heh. yup. *shifts eyes* What?
May the writing live on.
| BlueEyedTragedy 10/12/03 . chapter 1
This was definitely the perfect sequel. This may be (this, along with its predecessor) be your most original work yet...
| Seira 10/12/03 . chapter 1
well what do you expect me to say? of -course- i love it! you're so wonderful at coming up with original ideas...
I WANT YOUR FLOW!1ONE
| DeadRaven69 10/12/03 . chapter 1
KIK ASS CHICKA!
always creative ideas
I envy you...
| aconsciousjulia 10/12/03 . chapter 1
wow...a perfect follow up to the last poem, and this one, makes wonderful sense...i dream...a mechanical dream...lovely
| S.C. Preclarus Noctis 10/12/03 . chapter 1
Oh...that was so odd. But odd as in a good odd! It reminds me of the movie Bicentennial Man or howeveryou spell it...even if it was a boring movie..it had MEANING to it! -
| K.G. Hollingsworth 10/12/03 . chapter 1
Nice work... The rhythm gets a little fuzzy in the middle, but nice work.