Again, I say, meh?
Don't come down so ** yourself, sweetie. We all love you, and you're just right the way you are.

*hugs*
Megs

Meh? Again, I'm not told ANYTHING by ANYBODY, but hey, I live. So who? What? Just in general, in reference to specifics, huh? Very good writing, if a bit erm, angry. Nice convayence of emotions.
Love, your confused friend,
Megs

Such emotion, filling every line and verse. Condolences for the hard times you've gone through.

Ah yes, more angst. But we've all written some of those. Come to think of it, I don't think I've ever written a happy poem. Anyways, more good poems. The second one kind of sounds more like a story than a poem though. Anyways, good job!

Gah. Why are you so upset? Either at yourself or at her (I think I know who it is...). You didn't do anything horribly wrong like you seem to think you did, but it's not like what she did(again assuming I'm talking about the same thing as you) is all that horrible.

The poems are really very good, though, all flowing and pretty. Poems can be both pretty and angsty, you know, and they are.

*cringes and dies*

"Hello, My Treacherous Friends" by OK Go. Have a listen.

Your sarcasm was biting yet also confusing. I was confused as to who was the narrator and who the evil ** of a friend.

Pure anger, poison...nice... The end two lines just work it all out perfectly.

*hugs*

Love them both. So wonderful...poetical ranting works wonders!! Yay! More writing please...

hey well its a good thing you recognize your mistake. but i'm not that cold...i also congrate you on yet another well-written poem. *claps* you better be nice to him though. you've put him through lots of hell and he's completely clueless. tell him yourself why you've 'abandoned' him because he doesn't seem to be getting the picture from anybody else.
alright, no more help from me. it's like i'm the one with the problems here! JEEZ!
lol

again-*blink* i like this one, but you let the image of the petal floating in the sea of soda escape you! I'd include it.

()o() again..powerful and angry, but that's what makes writing fun..strong emotions. *nods*