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| Tate Soyker 2005-10-30 ch 1, | Wow, this kinda reminds me about what I felt after my x and I broke up and kept trying to piece our lives back together. Lots of pain and sorrow, but really touching as well. |
| A Tarnished Rose 2005-04-19 ch 1, | Wow, that's really cool. i liked the way you wrote the lyrics into it. I liked it better than lots of other stuff I've read, because all that didn't seem real, and yours does. Keep up the good work'Rose |
| Ayln 2005-02-16 ch 1, | A situation that has probably echoed millions of times around the universe; excellant portrayal. |
| The White 2004-12-07 ch 1, | Excellently written; I could really feel the pain and loss you must have gone through. It worked very well with the song interludes. |
| pneumothorax 2004-08-20 ch 1, | Sad, but had the almost made-up sound that real relationships bring. Sad, angsty, things I avoid usually. Interesting written with the song. |
| I am no longer writing 2004-08-16 ch 1, | beautiful... *wipes away the tears* |
| TypeSOUR 2003-10-16 ch 1, | This is really touching! Is this true? You should write a story based on this because it's very interesting. I'd definitely read it. |
| child-like dreamer 2003-10-13 ch 1, | wow 0_o amazing, very emotional, very deep, really made me feel like it was me who felt that way about someone else, even though that someone doesn't exsist, love the paragraphs and then tha break into one-liners, really makes those lines seem important and they were, ending=fablous,great, really great, good job, keep writing :) |