this is great. that's really all that i can say. there's nothing to improve on. full of feeling. great work!

you have no idea how much this poem touched me, but one thing really bothered me. i don't know if you really meant it, but you said you were weak and that you were nothing. i wanted you to know that if you meant it, that it is NOT true. and it never will be, because you are an amazing person. if you didn't mean it, well you got me to believe it, so kudos. I can relate to almost everything you wrote though, i think this is one of your better ones. if you wanted to you could probably publish it somewhere.