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Fox Angel 2005-10-02 ch 1,	abuseI just hate when stuff like this happens it's just so stupid! Anyway good job love your poem! I read your profie and I think you could easly become a wirter! You are now also on my favorite Authors list and your story is on my favorite list!
Madcow13 2005-08-18 ch 1,	abuseA little bit short to be honest and you haven't captured much emotion, although being so short it is hard to do that. The second to last paragraph could use some punctuation as it is a bit long-winded without it. However, for how short it is, it is good and does raise the point that you can get in trouble without doing anything wrong. It is good writing and shows a snippet of an event well. One thing unrelated to the story/prose/piece of work for English... You say you live in England but you go (or went to, considering you say in your profile that you are awaiting your GSCE results) to High School? Don't you call it Secondary School? I've never heard anyone in England calling it High School before. And I have a haunting feeling I've forgotten something... Ah, wait, as I look at the bottom of your profile I remember! OMG PLEZ R&R ME!! lol. Just kidding. Those sort of reviews are really annoying, I agree.
Hopeful Light 2005-07-05 ch 1,	abuseErrg...I hate girls like that...their minds are full of blubber! Anyways...it was an interesting story/prose.
u-don't-really-care 2005-06-16 ch 1, anon.	abuseUGH! I just HATE when stuff like that happen it's just so idiotic
Holy cow batman 2005-06-04 ch 1,	abusehey, i really liked you story, lime-girl. it was a pretty good ending...a cliffhanger huh. i hope you wont leave us hanging like that!
Stories-have-souls 2005-03-28 ch 1,	abuseWhoa...it ends with a slight cliffhanger. Makes you annoyed since the girl didn't do anything wrong. Well written, great to read!
Wing Chant 2005-02-22 ch 1,	abuseXD Gah, I hate getting in trouble for stuff you didn't even do. XD Thanks for surfacing this topic in your writing, because I think everyone has once or twice, has gotten in trouble for something they didn't do. XD
Beautifula 2005-01-30 ch 1,	abuseVery short but still very well described.
Nanners 2005-01-15 ch 1,	abuseGetting into trouble when you didn't do anything is icky. I liked the story. The only thing I thought was weird was that you used "madness" instead of "anger", but I think we all knew what you meant.
HannahMarie*Willow 2004-08-02 ch 1,	abuseHey gr8 lil story! uh poor girl...but her principal must b an idiot 2 not c she was trying 2 stop it! btw, don't u use 'headteacher'? mayb it diff @ ur school, cos most english schools do. ttfn
David Stephen 2004-07-17 ch 1,	abuseBrilliant how you portrayed this real-life drama. FAB, David
Celeste Se'oir 2004-06-18 ch 1,	abuseThat sucks, you know that happens too. getting in trouble over nothing... Later, ~Ffuffy~
strawberries'n'sugar 2004-05-14 ch 1,	abuseVery good idea. I don't if this was the point, but I kinda read into it the idea that the ones that look the best etc etc, are the ones that are protected by the important people. Like, if two people were arguing, and one was well known, popular, pretty etc, and the other was quiet, moody, didn't dress right and so on, then the first one would automatically be believed, even if they were wrong. Great writing. B.
Eien Nemurigusa 2004-05-01 ch 1,	abuseVery well done chapter. I love the descriotion you gave at their anger and the emotion of there faces. kepp writing
faerie-gumdrops 2004-03-18 ch 1,	abuseOOh eck, what's mr Brownlow gonna do? This is v v good and I luv stories in the 1st person. If u want please R&R my slipping and flying

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