I have nothing more to say besides you are on my favorite author list.
Once again, great poem.
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Whats a life to me besides 9,0 GP?
Gethsemane of the Stream.

I must say your summary drew me in. I just lost someone I loved who... was never really mine... sort of. But anyway,
"Once you've loved and lost,
You've lost to love
There's a pain in your heart"
Don't we all know it...
I really liked it,
Raye

um, that's happy... i loved the third stanza!

wow 0_o that was really sad. very um dark ,and painful like, if thats what u were going for-u hit the nail on the head ;)

alittle depressing...but its strong

Love it! Your first four lines were a WICKED opening.

"Death, death, or death?

You choose all of the above..."

That makes me shiver.

Good work!

Love it ... especially the ending. All of it, actually. loved and lost..lost to love... how do you come up with these things? The whole poem is incredibly well thought-out. Love love love love it. Don't want to lose it, so it's going in my favs... o.