This is something I can relate to, so of course I like it...

::identity crisis::

This is the kind of thing I love about amature poetry. I just read some of your older poems, and it's really amazing how your emotions have changed over time. Have you noticed it? Well, anyway, I really like this one. I can just imagine a person saying these things. Keep it up!

You're getting better guy, much better than I could have guessed.
"Oh I should be so perfect
To have imperfections
And to have such a friend
Who almost understands them.
Oh I know where the door is
But you have got the key
I'd take away the pain I caused
If you would talk with me."

*sighs...

ANOTHER poem about your virgin-ness...

James, just get a hooker...