I like it...very original!

::identity crisis::

I love it...your diction is so good, you really get the emotion across. Don't let anyone tell you that it's wrong to be so honest. I love how you stick with the simpler, germanic words... the emotion is really strong. Keep writing!

James, your seriously need to get laid if your writing poems about your virgin-ness :p

~Zero Kyuu Ni

Just keep writing, man. The poems are depressing, but it's good that you are being honest. It's good to get your thoughts out there and on paper(er, computer). Thanks for sharing, man. Keep it up, Wyatt.