Wow, this is awesome! You have a poetry style similar to mine, lol. I really liked the effect that this poem has. It's really good! I especially liked that line about "only important nouns are capitalized." Awesome.
Concerning Chloe has been changed and updated a lot. Check it out, tell me what you think!

Great poem, it's really deep. Nice wording I really like it.
p.s- Thank for reveiwing my poem :)

Sounds so hurtful. A very potent work.

Depressing yes, but really pretty all the same. Again, I applaud you.

Love always, Meggie

Wow, another really emotional poem. Really helps describe the darkness that everyone feels once in a while. I hope you're feeling better soon and I can see some happy poems!

I didn't follow that entirely, but it was horribly sad. The last two lines of the first stanza made me almost cry. I mean, I've thought that before, but the way you said it was just so sad! *tear* Beautiful poem. It speaks volumes.

*points at other people's reviews* Exactly. What they said. Writing what it's like to write this poem itself. And first stanza made you think.

This made me whoop. For real. Amazingly written

"because only

important nouns are capitalized

and i'm not one of them" made me snap my fingers. AMAZING AMAZING well done =) Tis going on my favourites list.

i like this. very good.

it's like you're writing what it;s like to write this poem, but all the while relating it to-something else. nicely done

Good. I like it.

W,

The Great, the Mighty, the Orc King

...interesting...I can easily say that the first stanza was my favorite...Though I do have to point out that since so few letters are normally capitalized...that lack of capilization would have /that/ much of an affect...

Wow, what a wonderful poem! Tell your 'friend' that it's awesome!

omg this is amazing

im speechless