Hiya, after talking to you at uni, I thought I come on here and check out some of your work for myself. This story is the first one I read so far. However, it won't be the last.
This piece was a very well written piece and portrayed such depths of emotion. It was interesting, sad and thought-provoking all at the same time.
Enjoyed. :)
See you at uni.
Vicky

Very well-written. I love the descriptions. Good work!