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coupdegrace 2004-04-08 ch 8,	This is awesome! But you are mass evilness doing this to her!! Grr!! But great story! Write more now!! Oh yeah you should try listening to the Real Mckenzies. I think you'd like them. They're Candian-born but Scottish. And they're punk. So yeah... Just a suggestion. :)
Misoshiru 2004-02-27 ch 9,	hm... interesting story... the story that im working on right now is called Time is Running Out as well, buts its kinda a sci-fi, it would be cool if you could read it! Anyway, i would have thought that Ash was better for Kay than Jhonen. But its your story so its all good. Update soon!
i'm a sucker for love stori... 2004-02-09 ch 9,	ah! I have finally found this story again and you leave it on a cliffhanger! And what the hell is with the chickens? Idlewild are totally cool especially that song live when ur in the mosh pit 2 people from the front-like me at Glastonbury last year. Do you know how many cute guys are moshers? I'm afraid I haven't heard of that last Scottish band you mentioned I guess us dweebs in Fort William aren't really up to scratch. That's so sad about Kay but I hope she lives out what she has to the full and that she survives with either Jhonen or Ash beside her. Damn you Jhonen coz I though Ash fancied her too! Mind you, he did take her to hospital, right? Please continue as soon as possible, hopefully before our Higher prelims (starting next Tuesday)?!? Lovin it so far and hope that this story will have a happy ending? Love ur sitcom status at the end, but what cheesy music would you choose for the finish? Something like a sing-song like Cheers? or the ever-changing neighbours theme tune? Just please continue as soon as possible!
Natalie 2004-02-05 ch 8,	This is a really good story. I love it. Why does she have to have leukemia? I don't want her to die. But i'm glad her and Jhonen kissed. I like them together. Great story. Please update soon.
MelanieJan 2004-02-04 ch 9,	That was great. Really interesting. I cant' wait to read mroe. Hope you update soon. :D:D:D
Dreamsong 2004-01-28 ch 8,	I really enjoy reading this story, it's got a good plot to it and you can go all sorts of directions with this. I hope Kay goes for Ash though, Jhonen just doesn't seem like her type! Anyway, since I'm American there were some things I didn't follow, like the grade/level system for school, but other than that I really like it. Keep it up! -Dreamsong
Kris 2004-01-28 ch 8,	The beginning of this chapter was a little shakey, but it still kept my attention. Overall the story is becoming more and more great and I cannot wait for the update. I've become attached to the characters and finding out Kay had cancer left me dumbfounded. Good Job. ^^
Kris 2004-01-24 ch 7,	So far I realy am ejoying the plot of this story. The seven chapters kept me glued to my computer screen and I like the suspense. Being American, there are some things I do not quite understand, but you carry them out well. I look forward to reading the next chapter, once written. Good Luck and keep up the good work.
Jen 2003-11-17 ch 6,	This is such a good story!! Ever considered getting you work published? You should. ^_^ Baibai now.
dissydesi 2003-11-01 ch 1,	hey grate story up load soon
VoicesOfViolence 2003-10-28 ch 5,	God chapter Joo-lee! Lots of drama going on there. From a writery POV it was well written and I liked the description. I do think it was good to have it drawn out for this story. Yup yup. More please!
peanutilover 2003-10-27 ch 5,	hey... maybe he's not such a bastard after all... waiting for more!
A Different Kind of Yellow 2003-10-25 ch 5,	Finally, a school system I understand! I'm Scottish (i go ta skool in Fort William) too by the way! Like ur story tho plz update the real chap 5 and not chap 4 AGAIN! Thanks!
Dead Red 2003-10-25 ch 5,	It's really good! But Chapter 5 is the same as Chapter 4. I wanna read Chapter 5! :(
VoicesOfViolence 2003-10-21 ch 4,	Yay! A new bit that I hadn't read some of already!! Woo. The characters are well written me dear (because I know who they are) That sounds all stalker-sih. Oh well, Angry, Constipated Men! O what a fun luncheon! WRITE MORE!

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