That was awesome. I really really loved it. So true. I love dark..cold..thunder lighting..rainy nights..Anywho. I enjoyed this very much

Wow, this is beautiful. I love how it rhymes for most of it... makes the flow go good.

i liked the repititon of this piece, but was turned off by a few forced rhymes ("for all of thy years" "all in a row" (does NOT rhyme with thou) "Lightning a ton" (where did this come from?) etc. and by the expression of only the sorrowful and vengeful aspects of nature, a concept much more faceted than that.

zac