 Dirty Wallpaper 2003-11-29 . chapter 1you like roses dont you?
this was beautiful i loved the meaning behind it, the tragic memories, the strength, the power to over come...
and some of the imagery was truly stunning, blinding in their vivid implications, and beauty...
"Growing from seed, growing to die." - i love the morbid irony, living jsut to die.
"The Right of Passage towards thy face
Towards thy lips, towards thy grace." - im melting, so AMAZING, there are no words...
"Old love has died; there is no grieving" i liked it because it summed it up, kind of like the dawn of the poem, the releif.
kudos! wonderful poem. |
 LiquidGenesis 2003-10-19 . chapter 1Very, very sweet. I love the pace that it makes you read at and the repetition of the 'bloodied roses' implying the past pain and yet you use soft words and phrases to 'heal' it but then rip it open again only to heal once more. Very nice. I have to say this is going on my favorites. Hell, your going on my favorites. Great work, you made staying up till two in the morning worth it.
Bless. |