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kreg . m. Mcminn 2003-12-19 . chapter 1
i really like this poem. i was wondeirng if i could use it in something i'm writing. as the prelude kinda. bear in mind it may in fact be published across the globe!! okay it's a great poem very dark and yet very nice:) i really love it and the spelling errors were few and far across. it was super great:) ask izzy about me for reference we talk on msn all the time:)
well thanks
kreg mcmcinn
Aimee Raven 2003-12-07 . chapter 1
Omg..ok I'd better go before writing another one of my incoherent reviews cos I'm just...*speehcless*...like...this is...I didn't think something as imperfect as a human could write something like this...sure you aren't an angel or something...WOW...this is simply...astounding...PERFECT.Love, Mia
Dirty Wallpaper 2003-11-29 . chapter 1
you like roses dont you?
this was beautiful i loved the meaning behind it, the tragic memories, the strength, the power to over come...
and some of the imagery was truly stunning, blinding in their vivid implications, and beauty...
"Growing from seed, growing to die." - i love the morbid irony, living jsut to die.
"The Right of Passage towards thy face
Towards thy lips, towards thy grace." - im melting, so AMAZING, there are no words...
"Old love has died; there is no grieving" i liked it because it summed it up, kind of like the dawn of the poem, the releif.
kudos! wonderful poem.
LiquidGenesis 2003-10-19 . chapter 1
Very, very sweet. I love the pace that it makes you read at and the repetition of the 'bloodied roses' implying the past pain and yet you use soft words and phrases to 'heal' it but then rip it open again only to heal once more. Very nice. I have to say this is going on my favorites. Hell, your going on my favorites. Great work, you made staying up till two in the morning worth it.

Bless.
fool 2003-10-19 . chapter 1
beautiful poem. very impressive. i have to admit that i don't understand a lot of it (although i often have the notion that we are "growing to die"), but it is definately a great composition.
IHJ 2003-10-14 . chapter 1
... *smile* I am speechless. I love this like how I love you.
Thank you so very much for loving me, Noah. *kiss*

Love,
Your Izzy
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