Hiya! this is sweet, lmao, but it makes me laugh...male insecurity (no offense), I like it a lot though..maybe someone should write the same thing from the girl's point of view...yea..that's an idea, lol. Love, Mia

That just makes me laugh, it's great. Beautiful and very smooth. I love the form which is like a dance all by it's self, I just laugh thinking about my eyes doing the 'zig-zag'ing to read this thing!

Bless.

I suppose the PG rating was for the "Sick sonovabitch" comment, eh? A foursome...three girls and one guy? *winking* Count me in, I could probably learn something! *laugh*
You're good with different styles of poems/fiction. I'm glad you explained to your thick-skulled girlfriend the significance of the indentations; don't think I could've gotten that without your help. It makes for a interesting read going back and forth and forth and back. ;)
I can actually see two guys having this conversation, but I think it has more impact on paper than it would if it was acted out (as part of a plot, no duh). It works for an confidence-bolstering convo between two dudes and of course, the metaphorical part, too. *smile* Glad we seized the day (afternoon and night, rather) on our date.

-Izzy J.