Hiya! This is cute! It has a...drunken feeling..it's all..kinda blurry..it feels dizzy..like mixed up..really good though, but I doubt I will ever really understnad exactly what it's about. Good job! please keep writing! Love, mia

Ha! Great ending and smooth rhyming. Nothing much else to say. I love the timing of it.

Bless.

*crooked grin* Dude, I don't think I'll ever understand WHOLELY what this poem means. Written dizzily, indeed! For me, the Izzily! *sugar sugar HIGH!* A walk in the park...so..urbanite!Snappy ending, love. No, not really snappy. More...well, adorable, rather.

-Izzy J.