Chuckle-y. Very chuckle-y. Quite enjoyed it actually. *applaud*

Love it! Absolutely love it! So much talent.
I know it sounds frivolous in a world where the blind try to comment on what they can't see, but I still think you should be published or something. More people should read what you write. Too much talent to be contained on the internet. Much too much.
Melissa

Hey, gotta love the genesis, lol...i love the scientific terms...lol...i like parodies, this is a good one. Love and good luck. Mia

Okay, okay. I know I left a review for this on fanfiction.net but...I'm just going to still it cause I wanna show all the nice people on FP.com what I think of this.
I like the difference of talking styles you have for the three different characters here. (I'm assuming the italics is an angel?) It's distinctive, and speaks for you as an author (and drama student, Mr. Tom Jones) to be able to think/converse in various personalities. The various hints dropped of previous sulphur-based specimen six-six-six...no doubt we know who he is. "ethical socialization flaw" Hee hee. I suppose we would think of ourselves with the rather informal word "human" insted of "** sapien", eh?
A so very unique and intriguing take on the beginning of our world. It mingles the creation and evolution (science) theories together... I like this!

-Izzy J.