omg that is truely awesome. i really liked that cuz its the truth in a sad way. he is just blamed for **. glad im not christian. oh well i really really like how u wrote that, truly clever. if u could i'd like u to read my poem Eve's Eve. its about eve eating the apple but in a way that makes the big wigs in the sky seem mean. ok thanx and u did a great job.

Nice. Really nice work here. It was a damn good parody. And I believe that that is one of the hardest genres to accomplish.
Great style.
I write - mostly poetry. If you are interested: http://w.opendiary.com/entrylist.asp?authorcode=B236832
Melissa

I love it...hilarious...perfectly thought out, perfect length, everything. Very good job.

Oh...I love this, lmao, really..this is so funny, truly...I mean...the devil...I really couldn't picture him like that, lmao..it's great! Keep writing! Love, Mia

Had to grin at phrases such as "we were cool, we were down/we were all tight and stuff" and "My boys and I" and "OOh, I’m shaking in my friggin’ boots.". :) Dunno why, but it reminded me of all those movies when all the high school Caucasians boys tried to be hip-hop and went around with baggy, boxer-showing pants and... Well...like Ali G, actually. *laugh* Doing that hand expression thing and all.
Like "Day Six", this is showing a biblical event from another perspective and it's VERY well-done. *filled with envy and pride* Luis' personality doesn't falter one bit and I love the description of his new job given by The Boss Man.
I hope you Ms. Sands gave you a high mark for this monologue. It's truly unique and entertaining and a bit satirical. Kinda says that the division between "Luis" and "The Boss" isn't a cataclysmic event as others think, but just a normal, everyday event in the dog-eat-cat (or whatever that expression is) world of running and managing a business.
Great monologue, Noah. I can see why you're a great drama student. (But a lot of paragraphs/sentences start with "So". A bit...hm...)

Izzy J.

Real funny and Luis' voice and personality comes across wonderfully.