Hmm...
I like it that you haven't capitalised what most people would here. You feel strongly about this. Or am I wrong?
'Pain and screams and death and blood
Mix before him in a bloody flood.'
For me, the poem wavered and lost a bit of its power here. Blood and bloody were used too closely put together, I think. It doesn't make that much of an impact in that way.
But as always, your ending is splendid. Makes me want to yell out to him 'Ha! See!'
(Don't get me wrong here, I neither delight in the notion that he may not exist, nor do I eagerly approve of his existence)
Check out Fall to Heaven (by me) if you want. I'd like to know what you think.
-love, Enat

Euh...*re-reading*..yea I think I got the meaning right, i really like the way you express this because, partly, these are my opinions but I could never actually express them and you did a greatjob..the rhyme is awesome and the flow is perfect, please keep writing! Love, Mia

As a rule, I usually avoid religious poems/essays because, well, they make me kinda uncomfortable. So what am I doing here? I don't quite know.
Yeah, your poem...it's true, from some people's point of view. I don't see the point of killing others because of religion but...sometimes religion is just another name for - never mind. I'll sound stupid.
Good poem, and I have to wonder why the last line isn't capitalized. Of course, since YOU'RE the poet, it'd be significant in some way. Perhaps to show that it's not "His" like most people write? That He/he isn't such a great guy or doesn't exist? *scratching leg* Yeah, a good poem, definitely shows your agnosticism (such a word exist?)/atheistism.

Izzy J.

So sad and yet so true, which makes it sadder still.

Bless.