Hey, br...cutting, this has great imagery! As usual...and I like it cos it isn't sooth and it doesn't really flow..ppl criticise me bout that all the time...
Be a White Sheep out of

The Multitudes of Blacks in

A Society bent on Differences to

Look Cool and be Hot while

Maintaining Firm Grips on Sanity Despite

Pressure of that Inevitable Cooker in

Hell’s real Kitchen inviting in

All those who dare to

Hold That Dreaded Sharp Knife to

Your Wrist.


thats my favorite part...very truthful...I like the moral..but what is the point in cutting? love and good luck, Mia

Cynical... A good mention of the fact that we are all trying to be non-conformists and yet...conforming to be non-comformists. Black sheep, indeed.

I remember the way you read this through the phone. I like how the rhythm wasn't smooth but jagged, showing how life isn't a smooth sailing.

Beautiful, Noah. And truthful.

-Izzy J.

Blades, blood and pain. Interesting.

The form really sets it off and the capatialization picks and choses the important parts, and gives it a beat all of it's own. Very nice, if not a little disturbing, but hey not everything can be fluffy right?

Bless.