Hiya! Omg...I found one I haven't reviewed. This is so beautiful! truly, it has such gorgeous imagery..I could really picture the sky..at all phases..this is gorgeous. Great flow and beautiful choice of words...fabulous! Love, Mia

Great ending and beautiful fluid rhythm again. This has to be the first time I've seen an allusion to egyptian mythology, I love it! Your good.

Bless.

one word... 'NICE'! ^_^