 Aimee Raven 2003-11-08 . chapter 1HAHAHAHAHA...sry...gotta love this, lol..i;m a grl...glad to c someone has finally realized the truth bout guys...ah..no offense, lol... sry...its very funny...didnt think a guy would put up this joke, lol. Love and good luck, Mia. |
 IHJ 2003-10-14 . chapter 1Imagine my shock and flush of delight when I opened my account and saw...23 author alerts e-mails! *hugging you tight* Thanks, Noah! And now no more nagging from me about uploading!
I do have to wonder how you put the name "Needlemeyer" together...thinking of sewing and mayors? ;) Typo:
The woman’s drop dropped. The worried look on her face turned to sheer desperation.
Have to love the words "sheer desperation", though. I don't know exactly why, but I do. You have little witty words/comments dropped here and there. I love your sense of humor when it comes to writing. Is the lack of indentation from "Dr. Benker relaxed" onwards intentionally? Knowing you, I can never be quite sure!
*laugh* I'm glad I know a new word and yep, this story is funny! (Even on the second time through.) *smirk* Appreciative to have a guy finally realize that the females have the brains! *slapping high five with other female reviewers* Damn funny story, Noah!
-Izzy J. |